Question

kids should do more writing write more since writing helps develop improtant skills abd gives kids experience that will help them in a careers. when you writing, you have to use youre imagination, which strengthening the mind. using youre imagination is an mportrant skill. also, writing it gives kids experince they will need for doing jobs in the real world and increases career options which is the correct way to fix the first mistake in paragraph 3? remove the word \it\ add a comma after \it\ change \it\ to \was\

Explanation:

To fix the first mistake in paragraph 3 ("Also, writing it gives kids..."), we analyze the options:

• "Remove the word 'it'": The phrase "writing it" is redundant because "writing" alone is the subject here. Removing "it" makes the sentence "Also, writing gives kids..." which is grammatically correct and clear.
• "Add a comma after 'it'": This does not resolve the redundancy or grammatical issue.
• "Change 'it' to 'was'": This would create a tense mismatch and incorrect structure ("writing was gives kids...") which is ungrammatical.

So the correct way is to remove the word "it".

Answer:

remove the word "it"