Question

persuasive essay : editing
which is the correct way to fix the first mistake in paragraph 1?
kids should do more writing write more since writing helps develop improtant skills abd gives kids experience that will help them in a careers.
when you writing, you have to use youre imagination, which strengthening the mind. using youre imagination is an importrant skill.
also, writing it gives kids experince they will need for doing jobs in the real world and increases career options
add a period after \write more.\
remove the extra words \write more\
add two commas after \writing\

Explanation:

In paragraph 1, the phrase "writing write more" has a redundancy with "write more" as "writing" already conveys the action, and "write more" is extra and disrupts the flow. Adding a period or commas doesn't address the redundancy; removing "write more" corrects the error.

Answer:

B. remove the extra words "write more"