Question

read the paragraph.
franklin delano roosevelt (fdr) was born in hyde park, new york. he was the thirty - second president of the united states. he was the only president ever to be elected four times. fdr was the president during the great depression and world war ii. he was the architect of the new deal. the new deal was a domestic program that provided economic relief and significant reforms in industry, finance, and housing.
which is the best way to improve this paragraphs sentence fluency?

• vary the sentence patterns.
• shorten the sentences.
• correct the sentence fragments.
• fix the comma splice.

Explanation:

The original paragraph uses repetitive simple sentences starting with "He was" or "FDR was", which creates choppy flow. There are no sentence fragments, comma splices, and the sentences are already concise, so varying sentence structures will improve fluency.

Answer:

Vary the sentence patterns.