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revising sentences with parentheses
read the sentence carefully. which revision corrects the error?
that music reminded me i remember it well about the adventure we had.
that music reminded me (i remember it well) about the adventure we had.
that music (reminded me) i remember it well about the adventure we had.
that music reminded me i remember it well (about the adventure we had).
that music reminded me (i remember it well about the adventure we had).
The original sentence has redundant, awkward phrasing. Parentheses should enclose the extra, non-essential clause "I remember it well" without disrupting the core meaning: "That music reminded me about the adventure we had." The correct revision isolates the redundant thought in parentheses while keeping the main sentence grammatically sound.
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A. That music reminded me (I remember it well) about the adventure we had.