Question

editing and proofreading are tools to help ensure that your final draft can be presented in its best possible form. proofreading - structure - your writing should be on topic and effectively respond to the prompt. - consider how the essay is organized. - grammar - include variation in your sentence structure to keep the audience engaged. - check for spelling errors. - mechanics - look for capitalization errors. - check over your punctuation. proofread the following passage. what needs to be fixed? many people struggle to fall asleep at night. sleep deprivation is a common struggle for young people. there are several reasons for the issue. technology can interfere with our sleep. stress can make it difficult to relax. options: capitalization error, lack of variation in sentence structure, spelling error

Explanation:

The passage has no capitalization or spelling errors. However, every sentence follows the same simple subject-verb structure, which creates repetitive, monotonous writing that fails to engage readers as noted in the proofreading guidelines.

Answer:

lack of variation in sentence structure