Question

question 7
10 pts
each passage contains a sentence fragment. select the revision that has no fragment.
george balanchine (1904-1983) was the founding artistic director of the new york city ballet, where he created stellar works. such as agon and jewels.

george balanchine (1904-1983) was the founding artistic director of the new york city ballet, where he created stellar works such as agon and jewels.
george balanchine (1904-1983) was the founding artistic director of the new york city ballet. where he created stellar works such as agon and jewels.

Explanation:

To identify the correct revision, we analyze sentence structure. A sentence fragment is an incomplete sentence. In the original, "Such as Agon and Jewels." is a fragment. The first option combines the relevant parts into a complete sentence by making "such as Agon and Jewels" a phrase modifying "works", resulting in a full sentence. The second option has a fragment after the period (the "Where..." part starts a new fragment as it's a dependent clause without an independent clause to attach to properly in that formatting).

Answer:

George Balanchine (1904-1983) was the founding artistic director of the New York City Ballet, where he created stellar works such as Agon and Jewels.