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read this paragraph from yvess analysis of enriques journey. (1) nazario draws on enriques experience to illustrate what children face in their attempt to escape difficult conditions. (2) she describes the dangers he faces on his journey northward. (3) the threat of extortion and violence from gangsters illustrates how vulnerable such children are. (4) but gangsters do not pose the only threat. (5) even the police, whose job is to uphold and enforce the law, steal from the migrants. (6) what i find most unsettling, though, is enriques temporary alliance with an ms gangster. which sentence should yves revise to make it more objective? the first sentence the third sentence the fifth sentence the sixth sentence
Objective writing should avoid personal opinions. Sentence (6) contains "What I find most unsettling", which is a personal - opinion statement.
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the sixth sentence