Question

rearrange the sentence below to remove any wordy sections. do not change the sentences meaning. this thesis statement is based on disneys finding nemo. your answer nemo, not marlin, has the experience of going through the most drastic transformation in the film.

Explanation:

The original sentence parts need to be combined into a concise sentence without losing meaning. The phrase "of going through" can be simplified, and we can structure the sentence to clearly state that Nemo (not Marlin) has the most drastic transformation experience in the film.

Answer:

Nemo, not Marlin, has the most drastic transformation experience in the film.