Question

rearrange the sentence below to remove any wordy sections. do not change the sentences meaning. this thesis statement is based on diary of a wimpy kid by jeff kinney. your answer in diary of a wimpy kid, jeff kinney sharply criticizes parenting styles that are strict.

Explanation:

The original sentence "This thesis statement is based on Diary of a Wimpy Kid by Jeff Kinney" is wordy. The new sentence "In Diary of a Wimpy Kid, Jeff Kinney sharply criticizes parenting styles that are strict" is a more concise and meaningful rearrangement related to the book's content, removing the unnecessary "this thesis statement is based on" part.

Answer:

In Diary of a Wimpy Kid, Jeff Kinney sharply criticizes strict parenting styles.