Question

be relevant and strengthen your claim. • check to see if you have properly used transitions and if your paper has an intelligible flow. editing: • editing focuses on grammar, mechanics, and conventions. • you should be checking to ensure you followed the rules of writing. • ensure the proper use of commas, capitalization, punctuation, sentence variation, placement, and other mechanics. what type of opportunities should you be looking for in the revision phase of writing? opportunities to plagiarize your peers opportunities to change your language opportunities to add unnecessary information

Explanation:

• Plagiarizing peers is unethical and not part of revision, so the first option is wrong.
• Adding unnecessary information goes against good writing principles in revision (which focuses on improving content flow, relevance etc., and editing focuses on grammar/mechanics).
• In the revision phase, improving language (like word choice, sentence structure to enhance clarity/flow) is a valid opportunity, so the second option is correct.

Answer:

B. opportunities to change your language