Question

many people play a musical instrument music can be soothing a lot of schools teach the recorder, it is inexpensive and easy to play. the guitar is another excellent instrument for beginners. it takes more practice than a recorder. which is the best revision to fix the error in the underlined sentence? it takes more practice than a recorder, and the guitar is another excellent instrument for beginners. the guitar is another excellent instrument for beginners, however, it takes more practice than a recorder. the guitar is another excellent instrument for beginners it takes more practice than a recorder. the guitar is another excellent instrument for beginners consequently it takes more practice than a recorder.

Explanation:

The original sentence is a run - on. The best revision should use proper punctuation or a conjunction to separate the two related ideas about the guitar being a good beginner instrument and it requiring more practice. The option "The guitar is another excellent instrument for beginners, however, it takes more practice than a recorder" correctly uses a comma after the introductory part and "however" to show contrast.

Answer:

The guitar is another excellent instrument for beginners, however, it takes more practice than a recorder.