Question

a student is writing a letter to the editor of the local paper about the reasons that young voters should support a mayoral candidate. read the paragraph from the letter and complete the task that follows.
a mayor for us
glenn havisham would make an excellent mayor for our city. as a member of the reeves valley city council, he has always been concerned about the welfare of the children and teens of our community. he helped to create several programs for young people; he also visited schools and accepted suggestions from students about their ideas for additional improvements, and an important one was actually implemented. he has had many other good ideas. students who are eligible to vote should cast a vote for him, and our young citizens should support him.
the student needs to add more concrete detail to her letter. click on three words or phrases that are too general and should be replaced by more concrete or specific phrases.
glenn havisham would make an excellent mayor for our city. as a member of the reeves valley city council, he has always been concerned about the welfare of the children and teens of our community. he helped to create several programs for young people; he also visited schools and accepted suggestions from students about their ideas for additional improvements, and an important one was actually implemented. he has had many other good ideas. students who are eligible to vote should cast a vote for him, and our young citizens should support him.

Explanation:

The words "excellent", "several", "many" are too general. "Excellent" doesn't define what makes him excellent. "Several" and "many" don't quantify the number of programs or ideas.

Answer:

excellent, several, many