Question

thomas paine, a pivotal figure in the american revolution, was born in britain in 1737. 2 when he was in his mid - twenties, he met benjamin franklin in london. 3 franklin helped paine move to philadelphia, where he pursued a career in journalism, he became the editor of pennsylvania magazine. 4 in 1776, paine authored a independence pamphlet called common sense, which was widely read throughout the colonies. which sentence should be revised to improve this paragraphs sentence fluency? sentence 1 sentence 2 sentence 3 sentence 4

Explanation:

Sentence 2 has an unclear pronoun reference. It's not immediately clear who "he" is at the start. Revision would improve flow.

Answer:

Sentence 2