Question

read the following excerpt from a student essay. how can the writer best improve his or her academic voice? cloning has come a long way since a sheep named dolly was successfully cloned in 1996. now it is becoming possible to use cloning for a variety of purposes. for example, cloning technology could be used to grow stem cells from which replacement organs, such as hearts and livers, could be grown. if a person became ill and needed an organ transplant, cloning could provide the answer. with advances in technology, even cloning humans has become a distinct possibility. scientists, bioethicists, and governments are all exploring this, even though it is clearly unnatural and unethical. by including technical terms by avoiding first - person pronouns by avoiding subjective statements

Explanation:

The statement "it is clearly unnatural and unethical" is a subjective opinion. In academic writing, objectivity is key. Avoiding such subjective statements helps to strengthen the academic - voice. Technical terms are already present, and there are no first - person pronouns in the excerpt.

Answer:

by avoiding subjective statements