Question

rearrange the sentence below to remove any wordy sections. do not change the sentences meaning. this thesis statement is based on matilda by roald dahl. influential person in matildas life on the grounds that she gives the young girl access to books.

Explanation:

The original sentence has some wordy phrases. "on the grounds that" can be replaced with "because" for a more concise expression.

Answer:

This thesis statement, based on Matilda by Roald Dahl, states that an influential person in Matilda's life is one who gives the young girl access to books because of the impact on her development.