Question

my pool players
gwendolyn brooks portrays the pool players at the golden shovel in a negative light.
a) write an alternate poem of your own pool players and
b) explain in a 250 - 300 word essay how your portrait of the pool players varies (how its different) from hers
please note: write the poem first in a positive way using a similar format. then explain how your poem is different.

Explanation:

a) Here is a positive - themed poem about pool players:
Our Pool Champions
In the corner of the room,
Pool players gather, a jovial bloom.
Cues in hand, eyes sharp and bright,
They approach the table with all their might.
Each shot is a dance, a calculated sway,
As they navigate the balls, day by day.
Laughter rings out, a shared delight,
In this game they find pure, sweet light.
Friendships are forged, bonds so strong,
As they play, all day long.

b) Gwendolyn Brooks portrays the pool players at the Golden Shovel in a negative light, perhaps highlighting their rough - edged nature or the seedy environment. In contrast, my poem presents pool players in a positive light. It focuses on the camaraderie, the skill involved, and the joy they find in the game. There is no mention of any negative connotations like vice or a down - trodden atmosphere. Instead, it emphasizes the positive social aspects and the players' enthusiasm for the sport.

Answer:

a)
Our Pool Champions
In the corner of the room,
Pool players gather, a jovial bloom.
Cues in hand, eyes sharp and bright,
They approach the table with all their might.
Each shot is a dance, a calculated sway,
As they navigate the balls, day by day.
Laughter rings out, a shared delight,
In this game they find pure, sweet light.
Friendships are forged, bonds so strong,
As they play, all day long.

b) My poem presents pool players in a positive light, focusing on camaraderie, skill, and joy, while Brooks portrays them negatively, likely highlighting rough - edged nature or seedy environment.