Question

drag each label to the correct location on the image.
read the following excerpt from \cave\ by gretchen legler. then, drag the properly paraphrased sentences to the green checkmark and improperly paraphrased sentences to the red x.

the first time id been in the cave the person who took me there said that often people who go down into crevasses are so overcome by the blue that it makes them cry. i remembered that as i lay there on my back, taking notes, trying to draw the crystals that hung like blooms of flowers above me, trying to figure out where the blue began and where it ended.

during the experience, the author attempted to sketch the beautiful blue crystals she saw in the cave.
during her first visit to the cave, the guide warned her that often people who go down into crevasses are so overcome by the blue that it makes them cry.
when the author first visited the cave, her guide warned her it could be an emotional experience.
the author describes her experience in the excerpt: \i lay there on my back, trying to draw the crystals that hung like blooms of flowers above me.\

Explanation:

1. Proper Paraphrases: These rephrase the original text without copying exact phrasing, while preserving the full meaning.

• The first sentence accurately restates the author's action of sketching cave crystals.
• The third sentence condenses the guide's warning about the emotional impact of the cave's blue into a concise rephrasing.

1. Improper Paraphrases: Either copy exact text from the original (plagiarism) or misstate details.

• The second sentence uses the original text nearly word-for-word, with no meaningful rephrasing.
• The fourth sentence directly quotes the original without rephrasing, which does not meet the requirement of paraphrasing.

Answer:

Drag to Green Checkmark (Proper Paraphrases):

• During the experience, the author attempted to sketch the beautiful blue crystals she saw in the cave.
• When the author first visited the cave, her guide warned her it could be an emotional experience.

Drag to Red X (Improper Paraphrases):

• During her first visit to the cave, the guide warned her that often people who go down into crevasses are so overcome by the blue that it makes them cry.
• The author describes her experience in the excerpt: "I lay there on my back, trying to draw the crystals that hung like blooms of flowers above me."