Question

feedback: jump and build your wings on the way down
incorrect | type of error
it’s rather difficult to build your wings before you fly because you have yet to find what you are up against. you dont now how long and harsh the journey will be or how strong your wings must be to suceed. |
if you are forced to find a solution than you will find a way to build those wings. you are stronger then you think. |
i would love to see where my path takes me and how i will turn out. however it take courage. |
i am thankful everyday for my grandfathers tail of perseverance. when faced with adversity he did not turn tale and ran. |
people who stay in they’re comfort zone dont grow. their are less opportunities and their staying in one place. |
we live in a complicated world. where we are enslaved by technology, bradbury predicted this already in the 1950s with his novel \fahrenheit 451\. |
without creativity and imagination we would never be able to take risks and in stead live in fear of the consequences. |
there’s some good lessons we can learn from bradburys quotes. i never heard this quote untill now. |
take the risk and youll figure out what your doing. if you fale to do so you feel miserably. like start your own buisness. |
as a christian my jump would be to trust jesus, that is hard. however the bible tells us to spread are wings and sore like eagals. |
what is you’re life’s purpose? just like a bird who has to trust it’s wings when it leaves the nest, you must trust that your parents have taught you good. (with handwritten corrections: \you’re\ to \your\, \it’s\ to \its\, \parents\ corrected from \parent’s\) |

Explanation:

Each entry is edited for grammar, spelling, punctuation, and word choice errors, with error types identified for each issue.

Answer:

1. Incorrect Text: It's rather difficult to build your wings before you fly because you have yet to find what you are up against. you dont now how long and harsh the joumey will be or how strong your wings must be to suceed.

Corrected Text: It's rather difficult to build your wings before you fly because you have yet to find what you are up against. You don't know how long and harsh the journey will be or how strong your wings must be to succeed.
Type of Error: Capitalization error (missing capital "Y" at start of second sentence), contraction spelling error ("dont" → "don't"), spelling errors ("now" → "know", "joumey" → "journey", "suceed" → "succeed")

1. Incorrect Text: If you are forced to find a solution than you will find a way to build those wings. you are stronger then you think.

Corrected Text: If you are forced to find a solution, then you will find a way to build those wings. You are stronger than you think.
Type of Error: Conjunction/word choice error ("than" → "then"), capitalization error (missing capital "Y" at start of second sentence), word choice error ("then" → "than")

1. Incorrect Text: I would love to see where my path takes me and how I will turn out. However it take courage.

Corrected Text: I would love to see where my path takes me and how I will turn out. However, it takes courage.
Type of Error: Punctuation error (missing comma after "However"), subject-verb agreement error ("take" → "takes")

1. Incorrect Text: I am thankful everyday for my grandfathers tail of perseverance. When faced with adversity he did not turn tale and ran.

Corrected Text: I am thankful every day for my grandfather's tale of perseverance. When faced with adversity, he did not turn tail and run.
Type of Error: Word choice error ("everyday" → "every day"), possessive error (missing apostrophe in "grandfather's"), spelling/word choice error ("tail" → "tale"), word choice error ("tale" → "tail"), verb form error ("ran" → "run")

1. Incorrect Text: People who stay in they're comfort zone dont grow. Their are less opportunities and their staying in one place.

Corrected Text: People who stay in their comfort zone don't grow. There are fewer opportunities when they stay in one place.
Type of Error: Contraction/word choice error ("they're" → "their"), contraction spelling error ("dont" → "don't"), word choice error ("Their" → "There"), quantifier error ("less" → "fewer"), sentence structure error (revised for clarity)

1. Incorrect Text: We live in a complicated world. Where we are enslaved by technology, Bradbury predicted this already in the 1950s with his novel "Fahrenheit 451".

Corrected Text: We live in a complicated world, where we are enslaved by technology. Bradbury predicted this already in the 1950s with his novel Fahrenheit 451.
Type of Error: Sentence fragment error (merged two sentences correctly), punctuation error (moved comma, formatted book title with italics per standard)

1. Incorrect Text: Without creativity and imagination we would never be able to take risks and in stead live in fear of the consequences.

Corrected Text: Without creativity and imagination, we would never be able to take risks and instead live in fear of the consequences.
Type of Error: Punctuation error (missing comma after introductory phrase), spelling error ("in stead" → "instead")

1. Incorrect Text: There's some good lessons we can learn from bradburys quotes. I never heard this quote untill now.

Corrected Text: There are some good lessons we can learn from Bradbury's quotes. I never heard this quote until now.
Type of Error: Subject-verb agreement error ("There's" → "There are"), capitalization error (missing capital "B" for "Bradbury"), possessive error (missing apostrophe in "Bradbury's"), spelling error ("untill" → "until")

1. Incorrect Text: Take the risk and youll figure out what your doing. If you fale to do so you feel miserably. Like start your own buisness.

Corrected Text: Take the risk, and you'll figure out what you're doing. If you fail to do so, you feel miserable. For example, start your own business.
Type of Error: Punctuation error (missing comma before coordinating conjunction), contraction spelling error ("youll" → "you'll"), contraction/word choice error ("your" → "you're"), spelling error ("fale" → "fail"), punctuation error (missing comma after introductory clause), adjective/adverb error ("miserably" → "miserable"), word choice/sentence structure error ("Like" → "For example" to fix fragment), spelling error ("buisness" → "business")

1. Incorrect Text: As a christian my jump would be to trust jesus, that is hard. However the bible tells us to spread are wings and sore like eagals.

Corrected Text: As a Christian, my jump would be to trust Jesus; that is hard. However, the Bible tells us to spread our wings and soar like eagles.
Type of Error: Capitalization error (missing capitals for "Christian", "Jesus", "Bible"), punctuation error (missing comma after introductory phrase), punctuation error (replaced comma with semicolon for independent clause), punctuation error (missing comma after "However"), word choice error ("are" → "our"), spelling error ("sore" → "soar"), spelling error ("eagals" → "eagles")

1. Incorrect Text: What is you're life's purpose? Just like a bird who has to trust its wings when it leaves the nest, you must trust that your parents have taught you good.

Corrected Text: What is your life's purpose? Just like a bird that has to trust its wings when it leaves the nest, you must trust that your parents have taught you well.
Type of Error: Contraction/word choice error ("you're" → "your"), pronoun error ("who" → "that" for animal), word choice error ("good" → "well")