Question

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(1)the unesco speech is persuasive because laura bush herself is an example of ethos because we can trust this person to advocate for educating children because taught in public schools in dallas and houston. (2)the rhetorical appeal she uses most is pathos. (3) for example, she uses pathos when she states, \all of us remember the teachers who made a difference in our lives\. (4) this shows that her primary purpose for giving this speech is to argue that every child needs a teachers and an education. (5)in conclusion, the speech is persuasive because she wants us to think of our promise to education the children.

1. which sentence best adds an explanation to show why the quote about teachers is persuasive?

a. this quote is important because it proves that laura bush was once a teacher.
b. this quote is persuasive because it makes the audience feel thankful for their own teachers.
c. this quote is persuasive because it uses numbers and statistics about teachers.
d. this quote is important because it shows that teachers teach in schools.

1. read the sentence below:

the unesco speech is persuasive because laura bush is an example of ethos, she was also a teacher and librarian.
which revision uses a fanboys conjunction correctly?
a. the unesco speech is persuasive because laura bush is an example of ethos but she was also a teacher and librarian.
b. the unesco speech is persuasive because laura bush is an example of ethos, and she was also a teacher and librarian.
c. the unesco speech is persuasive because laura bush is an example of ethos or she was also a teacher and librarian.
d. the unesco speech is persuasive because laura bush is an example of ethos for she was also a teacher and librarian.

1. which sentence corrects the grammar mistake in this line from the students draft?

\every child needs a teachers and an education.\
a. every child needs teachers and an education.
b. every child needs a teacher and an education.
c. every child needs teachers and an education.
d. every child need a teachers and an education.

Explanation:

8.

Pathos aims to evoke emotions. Making the audience feel thankful is an emotional - based persuasion, which aligns with the use of pathos in the speech. Option B is wrong as there are no numbers and statistics in the quote. Option C is not a strong reason for persuasiveness. Option D is a simple statement not related to persuasiveness.

"but" is a FANBOYS (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so) conjunction used to show contrast. Here, it contrasts the aspect of ethos with her other identities. "and" and "or" don't convey the right logical relationship, and "for" has a different function of giving a reason.

The subject "every child" is singular, so the verb should be the singular form "needs". Option A has the plural verb "need" for a singular subject. Option C has an incorrect article usage. Option D has a wrong verb - subject agreement.

Answer:

A. This quote is important because it proves that the Bush was once a teacher.

9.